West Hatch Write Path story writers 2013
A small group for the stories but they worked so hard. Well done all.
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Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK
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Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK commented on WP Central's blog post 08/10/2013 Gill James http://www.gilljames.co.uk
"I cowered behind mum, but even though I was frightened I couldn’t resist peeping at this man who claimed to be my dad.
“Listen you mad woman, let me see my son or-or I’ll kill you!”
I gasped but mum stood her ground. She…"
Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK commented on WP Central's blog post 08/10/2013 David Gatward http://davidgatward.com
"Suddenly, Jack started to wave his arms franticly to catch the boats attention. Waving his hands to and fro, whilst getting thrown around by the waves would be very hard to spot. Jack sighed in relief as he saw the sailors edging towards him then a…"
Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK commented on WP Central's blog post 08/10/2013 Linda Newbery http://www.lindanewbery.co.uk
"I heard him running after me, yelling, “Come here you! I’m going to break your bones and make it in to a chain and sell it!” I made a spilt second decision to run into to the nearest room and lock the door and think of an escape…"
Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK commented on WP Central's blog post 08/10/2013 Helen Orme http://www.ransom.co.uk/Authors/HOrme.html
"“Daisy? Can you see that?” Megan stuttered anxiously. “err yeah, what? Do you think I’m blind; stop being a wimp; I need to get home for violin practice!” replied Daisy in a rather jokey tone. As they turned the corner…"
Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK commented on WP Central's blog post 08/10/2013 Malcolm Rose http://www.malcolmrose.co.uk
"Before Zoe could even begin to think about her life before the many years she lived underground, the terrifying creature whispered something truly horrific into the cold, misty air. She couldn’t understand what the vile monster had said, as it…"
Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK commented on WP Central's blog post 08/10/2013 Jane Prowse http://www.hattorihachi.com
"I began to haul myself up the rope, eager to get out of this cold, unforgiving nightmare. I saw a light creeping in through a hole in the roof, but my hands felt like they were on fire, I did not know whether or not I would make it. I managed to…"
Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK commented on WP Central's blog post 03/10/2013 Poetry 2 - Dave Cryer 2 http://www.davecryer.co.uk
"Sweaty, burning heat
People emerge from their homes
Drinking in the heat
Golden crispy leaves
Kids enjoy the last bit of warmth
The season of snow
Stinging freezing numb fingers
Creatures go to sleep
Nature comes to life
As if a switch has been…"
Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK commented on WP Central's blog post 03/10/2013 Poetry 2 - Dave Cryer 3 http://www.davecryer.co.uk
"Deep within the forest,
The bear began to cry,
The crumpled leaves fell down,
Where the lonely bear lie,
Lady Jane of Grey,
Screamed in delight,
Her Love had not forgotten her,
He brought her away from fright,
They spent their lives…"
Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK commented on WP Central's blog post 03/10/2013 Poetry 2 - Jane Prowse 3 http://www.hattorihachi.com
"The amount of money they had to pay,
They cried miserably in dismay.
A river streaming from their eyes,
Hoping all this was just a lie.
Sunday they met this Joey Humber,
Masticating a cucumber.
To see him sitting by a pool,
With a pile of swimming…"
Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK commented on WP Central's blog post 03/10/2013 Poetry2 - Anthony McGowan 2 http://anthonymcgowan.com/Hello.html
"It was…
A crazy thing
I have just seen
I was crying with blood and tears
Drip drip drip
Then I see a gleam of gold shining on the sea
Her bracelet I thought
And then I see…
A female leprechaun
She has transformed
Not an angel a little…"
Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK commented on WP Central's blog post 03/10/2013 Poetry 2 - Jan Siegel http://jansiegel.net
"“Ahhhhh”!!! he screamed as he fell to the floor,
“I need to get out, where is the front door?”
He ran for his life, betty close behind,
I don’t think this yeti is very kind.
But the yeti gave up and turned back to his…"
Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK commented on WP Central's blog post 18/10/2012 Poetry Dave Cryer 1 http://www.davecryer.co.uk/
"Yes, Halloween is nigh, And so is your demise
It shall happen before your eyes
So you might not want to try.
Trees turn into scary figures
Leaves do not dance but lurk
They will swirl and bustle,
And scream and howl
Until you start to choke.
The…"
Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK commented on WP Central's blog post 18/10/2012 Poetry Etherington Brothers http://theetheringtonbrothers.blogspot.co.uk/
"I swirl around, I move around,
I will never touch the ground
As I know before I reach the earth
I will have no-one to calm me
I stumble around,
I fumble around
I’ll be alone forever
For I shall never have a companion
With whom I share my…"
Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK commented on WP Central's blog post 18/10/2012 Poetry Jane Prowse http://www.hattorihachi.com/
"All the memories of him I have, They are always pure
Nothing I said could have made him stay.
Nothing could give him the cure.
His time was up,
I could do no more.
“I will always remember you,”
That is what I swore.
Broken hearted,
I saw…"
Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK commented on WP Central's blog post 18/10/2012 Poetry Dave Cryer 2 http://www.davecryer.co.uk/
"Sam steps onto the lighted stage, All the judges were of old age,
He took a deep breath and held it in,
The crowd eagerly leaning in.
His face slowly changes colour, His heart beating and his stomach a-flutter
Boos came from Sir Bob Renato.
He threw…"
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RE: Our opinions on Write Path
Posted on October 11, 2010 at 10:53 0 Comments 0 Likes
Write Path is a very enjoyable way of learning how to write descriptive parts of a story and also to learn how to be little authors. It is a step up from writing with pen on paper. It's a fantastic way of knowing how to be descriptive and having a strong opinion. It wasn't necesarily that easy to continue a story written by other students, but surely it is a great way of learning many thing in English/ writing stories. A good thing about Write Path is that the world is taking part, and that…
Continue we think that write path is a good way for students to be creative and show how good they are at english and story writing. it is also good at making people think about what they are writing and how …
Posted on October 11, 2010 at 10:53 0 Comments 0 Likes
we think that write path is a good way for students to be creative and show how good they are at english and story writing. it is also good at making people think about what they are writing and how to improve it before they publish it. the task was challenging and fun to do and we really enjoyed it.
we think that the other stories are very well written and have a good ending so that other schools can carry on easily.
we enjoyed it very much and we hope that…
Continue Our opinions on Write Path
Posted on October 11, 2010 at 10:52 0 Comments 0 Likes
Write Path was a very fun experience for everyone here. We enjoyed taking part and working together to create an extract of a book. A good thing about write path is that you have to use other peoples ideas to create a extract. Another good thing is the fact that it is different to normal story writting because you get to blog your story not just write it on paper, which makes it different and more exciting.
Here are some of the best things about Write Path:
- It is…
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Posted on October 11, 2010 at 10:51 0 Comments 0 Likes
I have enjoyed doing the write path this year. The paragraphs are very interesting and descriptive. There are very good sentence structures. They all left off on excellent and thrilling cliff hangers. I wouldn't say that any paragraphs or schools were the best or worst, they were all excellent and creative. Hopefully, I can do the writing path next year!
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Posted on October 11, 2010 at 10:46 0 Comments 0 Likes
I think are story brings lots of tension. It will really catch your attention and you will never want to stop reading on
Comment Wall (4 comments)
- At 10:37 on September 11, 2009,
WP Central said… - Hi Jayne if you go to the page for WP Central and click on WP Centrals Apps on the left hand side you should see the file. Let me know if not!
- At 12:42 on September 11, 2009, WP Central said…
- Don't worry Jayne we will get there! even if you can't Skype or MSN you can still take part it's fine. Probably easiest if you email the form to me writepath2008@yahoo.co.uk and we can go from there. Still feeling pretty rough actually - boys and their germs eh?!
- At 13:02 on September 11, 2009, WP Central said…
- Please don't be disheartened - even if you can't have video contact etc you can still see the stories developing during the day and I will be asking schools to blog about their bit of the event on this ning so there will be things to do. Have a great weekend
- At 8:57am on October 14, 2010, Lynne Coppendale gave Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK a gift…
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