03/10/2012 Pippa Goodhart


The School Rules didn't actually say, 'kidnapping teachers is not allowed', but Bags was pretty sure that it wasn't allowed, all the same. But there was only one way to find out for sure, wasn't there? And, anyway, there was no alternative now that ..... 

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Comment by Daniel Robinson on October 3, 2012 at 9:27

By Jack Deangelis, Holy Trinity Primary Scholl, Wimbledon, UK


…there were no kind teachers anymore and they were always too busy to notice.

“We’ll get them for what they did,” Marcus angrily muttered.

“Never!” shouted Thomas. That’s crazy! he thought. Just because his teacher had broken his pencils and gave him six detentions in a row and accused him of something he hadn’t done (all that, for absolutely no reason!)He still had no right to kidnap a teacher! But maybe just play a prank on one like Miss Crank E. Pants…

“Okay” Said Thomas I’ll do it. Maybe Thomas could make this a chance of a lifetime. He could get his own back on those mean teachers. The next morning, Thomas went to meet Marcus In the playground.

“Here’s the plan,” he whispered. “We hide out in here until Miss Crank E. Pants walks in. Next, I press the button and that activates a switch where that bucket of goo falls and SPLAT!”

So they waited and waited until they heard footsteps getting closer and closer until SPLAT!!!

Comment by Rosie Pike on October 3, 2012 at 10:49

There was a deafening, ear-splitting scream as Miss Crank E. Pants was smothered in green, disgusting goo and the boys burst out laughing. She looked around at them and franticly grabbed her phone to call the headmaster. Marcus knew he would have to stop her from calling; however, all he had was a flimsy, plastic 30 centimetre ruler.

Thomas scanned the area looking for escape but Miss Crank E. Pants blocked the only exit.

“What now?” he yelled nervously, but Marcus had started charging at Miss Crank E. Pants holding his ruler.

 He lunged at her rapidly knocking her phone from her witch-like, wrinkly hand, just before she hit the green button. Marcus finished with an expertly aimed kick to the stomach and she doubled over in agony. He ran back over to Thomas as he explained that their mission controller, Bags would be at the gates, waiting. Thomas had questions whizzing round his head and was still amazed at how swiftly Marcus had taken out Miss Crank E. Pants. They raced to the gates only to find the chunky Headmaster waiting, Marcus knew he would be a challenge to take-down, but he had to keep the mission on track…


Joshua Pilcher, Joshua Lamyman and Bertie Thomas, Bishops Stortford College Junior School

Comment by WP Central on October 3, 2012 at 12:04

Marcus quickly sized up the headmaster trying to calculate how to get past. The headmaster was blocking the entrance, his body covering all the gaps. The Headmaster looked too big to beat. Marcus knew he was going to get in trouble with control but he wasn’t going to risk getting hurt. He looked to the side seeing a gap in the wire fence where someone had obviously tried to get through before. Marcus slid on the mud through to the other side jumping onto the pavement. The Headmaster tried to follow but was too large to fit through the gap. Marcus punched the air and grinned. He jumped in the awaiting car and sat down.


“Go!” he shouted. The voice that replied wasn’t who he was expecting…………..


Carrie: Coaching at Renaissance Learning

Comment by Charlotte Barton on October 3, 2012 at 13:48

It was his father! His father asked "What are you doing Marcus?" Marcus was very shocked. Suddenly his father walked in the school. Marcus ran away as his father was talking to the headmaster about Marcus's bad behaviour. Marcus seemingly dissapeared from the headmaster.

After his father stopped talking to the headmaster he hilariously looked for his son. Next, the headmaster suggested "Maybe your son is outside!" The door was ajar and Marcus's father chased after nothing (AKA: Marcus) Then he found Marcus underneath the parked car and shouted at him. He [Marcus] was taken to the headmaster's office and got a good telling off. Marcus was scared and didn't know why his father found him......

Kevin, Maisha and Joshua from Globe Primary

Comment by Allison Painich on October 3, 2012 at 15:13
Dad! Hi! I'm glad to see you. Don't give me that balderdash. I just saw the headmaster and he said your behavior has been unexceptable. Day, why are you talking to me like this? I'm your son. "Marcus, if your behavior keeps getting worse and worse, I will send you off," said Dad. Blah...blah...blah. Marcus mumbled under his breath. His dad struck him in his chest one hard time. Mr. Milne went into the car and told Marcus, "I'll be back."

Good Shepherd School
New Orleans, Louisiana, USA

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