09/10/2013 Bali Rai

‘Because he doesn’t care…’ said Lily.

Only her voice started to change. It began to echo and the tone grew deeper and more resonant. The result was masculine, bestial and cruel. Daemonic even…  


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Comment by Carola Webber on October 9, 2013 at 0:42

‘... he doesn’t care…’ repeatedLily.

The sound threatened to take away her identity, everything she ever had and ever will have. Ever since she was possessed by this ruthless demon, her identity was all she ever had. “I expounded him to join me in the underworld, conquer the human world, for they are nothing but inoperable being”, Lilly said. However he did not care, he was not easy to convince because he alleged he has family up there and he forbids deserting them.

Nevertheless, Daemonic couldn’t accept this circumstance. He HAD to have the boy, he needed to follow them to the underworld and conquer the lowlife human beings. But he was too tenacious and wouldn’t join them on the path to salvation. “I NEED to have him, he’s the only one who can defeat me and I WANT him on OUR side!’’ shouted Elvis DeCaprio. “But boss, he defined everything, fought for humans rights.” said Lily.

“There are always other defenseless beings that would easily turn in to the trap” exclaimed Lily. But that was the problem; Daemonic wanted strong and powerful human beings that could resist the power of the demons. This was difficult, there was only one choice left. “Kill him”, whispered Elvis DeCaprio.


Written by Helin Celik, Lillian Irima and Marcus Ishac, Delany College

Comment by Karen King - Oakbank School on October 9, 2013 at 11:00

Andrew shook his head, and realised there was no one there but him and Lily – whatever was possessing her must have been giving him hallucinations!

Lily had always been his best friend, ever since this thing, this virus took control of her he had often thought of running away, but the memories of her helping him made him more determined to help her through this. No matter what.

He thought of reasons why she is in this state, or that might cure her. Then he remembered, the mad, old man who told him about demons possessing humans since the dawn of time. Ever since mankind entered this world,  the ruler of the underworld, wanted to wipe out the entire species. Ever since the Gods banished him to eternal suffering. He wanted revenge on the Gods, the way he would do this is to punish their creations…

“I will take away the Gods creations!” Bellowed Lily in a deep, yet thoughtful voice.

“Lily your awake,” Said a concerned Andrew “What are you talking about?” He wanted to shake some sense into her. “What can I do?”…

Then silence, just silence. He approached her.

By Khaled Miah and Tomas Bailey.

Comment by Adrian Thompson Laisterdyke UK on October 9, 2013 at 13:37
Lily flung Andrew across the room. A fireball appeared in her hand. Andrew clambered to his feet, and dived to the side. She exclaimed "I have to conquer the world. When I do, I am going to kill everyone. you will be the last one. You will watch and pray for me to kill you...". Andrew laughed, and said "You're never going to conquer the world, you worthless piece of junk." Lily scratched at her face with anger. Blood began pouring down her face, as she stumbled towards Andrew, murder in her heart. He stepped backwards through the wall...
Comment by Adrian Thompson Laisterdyke UK on October 9, 2013 at 13:37
Sorry - Zahrah, Hinna, Aneeka & Omar, Laisterdyke Business & Enterprise College :-)
Comment by Allison Painich on October 9, 2013 at 16:30
...his foot catching on a piece of rubble. He tumbled backwards into the dark room, groaning as the back of his head collided with the cold stone floor. He looked up at the hole, and Lily was standing there with an evil smirk on her bloodied face. Andrew felt his eyelids getting heavy as his head started to pulse. Lily stepped into the shadows looking down at him, grinning as he passed out.

Andrew gasped as he was awoken by a ear-piercing screech. He looked to his side noticing the iron chains pressing him to the wall. Beyond him, he noticed dead bodies everywhere. He was about to move, but he was met with a sharp pain in his chest.

"I told you you'd be last," Lily said before beginning to laugh like a maniac. That was all Andrew say or heard as he embraced the darkness.

Trinity, Samuel, and Kelsey
Lee Junior High
Monroe, Louisiana, USA

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