10/10/2013 Poetry Jane Prowse


Crystal clear, clean and warm,

I float in the azure ocean of my dreams,

Listening for dolphins and other watery beings,

Willing them to join me, 


Making the most of our pristine seas...


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Comment by Paula Ward on October 10, 2013 at 8:52

Silky smooth, sleek and glistening,

They glide gracefully with perfect ease,

Their fins cut through the water without a single ripple,

Whistling to their shoal,


Suddenly an ear piercing squeal shatters the peace…


By Juliette & Phoebe

Robert May's School

Comment by Leah Falkingham on October 10, 2013 at 10:24

Then turn into a horrible nightmare,

Rushing through the waves.

The distrubance was too much to bare.

As the dolphins dive, they jump out sky high,

Then they will dive in as low as the eye can see!


The ocean breeze circles the atmosphere,

It brings all the locals feelings of fear...


By Connor, Jonny and Annalise - Longbenton Community College, Newcastle.

Comment by Carol Webb on October 10, 2013 at 11:46

As the final pieces of metal moves into place


The deeper the safer

But the darkness keeps on comsuming us

Blackness around;

Destruction above

Our demise either way

We cry out for help and mercy

But the metal is ever screeching

Pristine no longer...


By Miles, Harry, Sam, John, Jeavon Forest Hill Boys Lewisham

Comment by Adam Lancaster on October 10, 2013 at 13:40

No longer able to shine so bright

to be seen by others as the guide

to know what it means to swim with friends

we scatter

we scarper

like a guided harpoon

ready to catch us

a moment too soon


Chris Yr8

Comment by WP Central on October 10, 2013 at 15:07

We swim and we swim,

Not a moment too soon,

Here comes the great white shark,

Coming at us like a big balloon.

Vicky, West Kirby Residential School, Yr 7. 

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