01/10/2014 Chris Bradford

Jason could feel his fingertips slipping off the slick rock. Every muscle tense in his arms, he desperately tried to pull himself up. But he had no strength left after the two hour climb.

'Hold on! I'm coming!' cried Layla, scrambling across the cliff face.

Jason saw the panic in her eyes. They both knew she was never going to reach him in time.

His left hand lost its purchase on the rock and he dangled like a leaf in the wind. Glancing down at blackness beneath him, Jason wondered if all the sacrifice had been worth it. Henry dead. Jayde missing. Arthur killed. And now it was his turn...


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Comment by WP Central on October 1, 2014 at 9:13

His hand was slipping, eventually he fell. He was falling for about a minute but it seemed ages. Jason fell into the left overs of a ship, with rotten wood breaking his fall. He then saw a sheep, but with devils horns for ears, and two aliens, all looking at him. 

Layla followed Jason down more slowly, as she watched the sheeps eyes glowed red and flashed and the sheep charged and leaping at Jason swallowed him up in one snap.

“Jason! Jason!” shouted Layla, as he shouted back…

 Scott, Jordan, and Lauren, Wick High School.

Comment by WP Central on October 1, 2014 at 9:53

"I'm ok".......sticking his legs out straight in front of him he managed to kick the enormous sheep in the back of it's throat causing it to cough him back up onto the rotting timbers of the ship. The aliens had disappeared and had Layla! With an angry scream Jason turned back towards the monstrous woolly animal and again kicked it with all his might, sending it bleating over the side into the turbulent sea below. His heart was beating fast with fear, what had the aliens done with his  beloved and where had they taken her? He'd better find out and fast!

Bev Humphrey

Write Path Founder

Comment by Nicola Gowing on October 1, 2014 at 10:44

He didn’t move; he couldn’t.  He was paralysed with fear who, what, where and how?!!! He wanted Layla back he wanted the aliens gone he wanted a normal life why was it always him dyeing hurting (well not dyeing but ‘cha know). Jason moved a tiny bit, his back felt like people were sticking long dangerously sharp knives in his pale fragile back; his eye sight was horrendous alough he could see a blinding white piercing light! BOOM! “Layla, Layla!” Jason called “HELP ME!”  He couldn’t see. As his emerald eyes were gleaming in the new light his cameral brown hair brushed his sickly white forehead that was sweating buckets. Around him he could just make out trees waving at him trees bustled around where he was laying! Was he in a forest or well where else??? “Hello Jason ….”

“Who are you llllllayla!!??”

“Yes hello Jason “Jason interrupted her

“Where are we are we safe …..”

“Yes you are always safe with me, up you get now my love we are safe!”

Jason looked in to layla’s eyes they were not their normal comforting deep sky blue however bright amber staring at him with lust and greed.

“Layla are you okay Layla Layla!” Jason whispered with a hint of fear to the one he once loved “Layla please take those those thing out please don’t joke hello babe there is an alien invasion they are hunting us down for the piece stop it now!” An evil monstrous gleam came into her newly amber eyes “I know Jason dear I know!” something wasn’t right Layla’s normal soft silky voice was rough and full of hatred “I I I I I I need to get out of here!” Jason screamed too late. BANG. BANG. A flash of light and all was black …

Liberty Rhodes 

Great Yarmouth High School

Great Yarmouth 

Comment by Lynne Coppendale on October 1, 2014 at 11:48

Soon after that frightful moment, Jason suddenly found himself lying down, lying down on some sort of weird material. “Is this supposed to be some kind of joke Layla?” Jason said aloud.” Cause if it is… um…. it is nowhere near funny!” 10 minutes or so passed, nothing was to be seen, heard or touched. Jason was half way through dozing off to sleep when, BANG! “Hello!?” Jason called. He decided to get up. The room seemed to all be pure white, as if it could go on forever, but he thought: that will be absolutely IMPOSSIBLE! Why would I think such a thing? Before Jason could even think or say another word, there was a figure in the distance, he couldn’t quite make out what it was. But why? There was no smoke or fog anywhere...

When the mysterious figure got closer, it stopped; started acting out some weird movements then faded away. Scared, Jason decided to get up, but in between the process, a cold hand grabbed hold of his shoulder and put pressure on, so much pressure Jason fell down. He should have stopped at the floor but he fell again. Well, that’s what it felt like…

Was Jason really falling?

What was that strange BANG Jason heard?

Where was he?

Kayleigh, Danum Academy

Comment by Katie Barnard on October 1, 2014 at 13:56

Jason woke up and shouted

“Layla” but there was no reply .He felt scared and worried ,nervously he got to his feet and looked around but she was nowhere to be seen and at this point he was very frightened …


Aisha Shah and Emma Lewis

Comment by Allison Painich on October 2, 2014 at 15:00

When Jason looked for Layla, it was too late.  She was dead.  Jason found her lying down on the bathroom floor with blood everywhere.  Suddenly, Layla a ghost, and she began haunting Jason.  He was scared and didn't know what to do.  Jason finally escaped the haunted house through the bathroom window...but he didn't make it far.  Layla was close behind.

George and Elijah

Carroll Jr High School

Monroe, Louisiana, USA

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