02/10/2014 Poetry - Tommy Donbavand

Remember last week

When your Grandma bit my arm?

Now, I’m a were-gran!


Haiku from me this year!  Remember a haiku is over three lines of 5 syllables, 7 syllables and 5 syllables. 


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Comment by Rosie Pike on October 2, 2014 at 9:25

I'm eating your friends

While cou...coughing up fur balls

Do you dare enter?

Anish, Tilly and Michael

Comment by Simone Pope on October 2, 2014 at 10:35

You have dared enter,

And fell victim to my wrath;

You tasted delish…


You think that’s absurd?

Breaking news- outbreak occurred

Of vampire cousins!

By Adam at Woolmer Hill School, Haslemere.

Comment by Katie Barnard on October 2, 2014 at 11:41

Now my hairs sticking up

My knitting’s spread with poison  

With long twisted arms


If you don’t believe

Come and see for your self  

Now I’m horrendous 


Take my word for it

It has no deathly poison

But I just said DEATH


By Katie and Friend

St James Senior Girls’ School

Comment by Jayne Davidson, WHHS, UK on October 2, 2014 at 13:40

I grasp my victim
And think it’s last night’s dinner
Stay away from me!

Think it’s a merry joke?
Then gaze at my chatter teeth
Beaming like crystals.

An innocent gran
Limping on the streets alone
Ha! It’s my disguise…

Scintillating stars
Observe the desolate wood.
That is where I hide.

Transforming swiftly
Grey hair, red eyes are features
That will alarm you.

By: Avesta Saule
West Hatch

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