2/9/15 Priory School story 12 Barry Hutchison

How long have I been asleep? Days......weeks.....months? Down here in the dark , locked away, out of sight. The others are still sleeping, the boy, the girl, their parents but......I’m not the only thing awake down here. Something’s with us , something lurking in the shadows , something.......wrong. I can hear it walking – no not walking, skulking creeping across the floor, over the supplies, over the equipment keeping the others alive. I can hear its breath rasping in and out rattling at the back of its throat. Not normal. Not human. I don’t know how long I’ve slept, I don’t know why I’ve been woken but I know the thing here with us wants to do us harm and I know I’m not going to let that happen.

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Comment by Miss Errington on September 2, 2015 at 9:42

I got up and looked around and heard a big bang so I went down stairs and saw another shadow and I screamed. I got my light and looked at the wall there was blood dripping down the wall, I was terrified. I went back up and the boy was gone, I opened the door and he had hung himself from the ceiling. And he was split I got him down and then I got pushed on him it was a zombie I got up and ran it ran as well it grabbed me  

Lee Cheeseman and Taylor Dean           

Comment by Miss Errington on September 2, 2015 at 11:08

There was a zombie behind me. Whilst creeping around the cellar, I felt the touch of weightless fingers on my shoulder they grabbed my shirt and pulled me to the head was pounding and my heart was racing. As weak as I was I struggled to get up from the damp, dirty and hard floor. I flicked my head to the right thinking I would be free but there it was staring at me. Fear took over my body from head to toe. I was shivering horrendously because of the icy cold drafted coming in from the zombie shaped hole in the wall. I was trapped. What was I going to do? I was sounded by the refection of the zombie and its self. Confusion ran through my brain, suddenly the world was spinning. A voice echoed saying get out of my way! So I shouted it out to the zombie it had a confused face.

by Labiba Ahmed , Erin Roffey and Chloe Sene

Comment by Miss Errington on September 2, 2015 at 12:06

Covered in blood I was terrified; of the menacing zombie that lurked around me. thought of  his ripped bloody face that was haunting my dreams and now a reality.I ran out the next door that I saw then zombie chased me out the zombie shaped hole in the wall out the door to the forest where I thought I was safe.But little did I know that I would soon be zombie dinner.    

Comment by Miss Errington on September 2, 2015 at 12:07

this was written by poppy ward heagren and leeanne lacy

Comment by Miss Errington on September 2, 2015 at 14:07


As I hid behind the tree, I could hear a vibration coming from behind me! I a terrified, I was shaking rapidly. WHAT WAS I GOING TO DO? I felt a cold, wet hand crawling  up my back. Then the zombie grabbed my neck! “HELP,” “SOMEBODYS TRYING TO KILL ME!” I screamed.  Then he chucked me up the floor. As I tried to pull myself up, but he was just too strong! Suddenly he dragged me through the haunted, empty woods. All I could see was the midnight sky and his red, bold eyes! A hard huge bolder smashed against my head which knocked me out!!! As I woke up I found my- self in a old, rotted cabin… WHAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN?


By Billy Harris and Morgan Hamlin

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