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Comment by Laura Taylor on October 11, 2010 at 9:21
I think that there is something really scary downstairs and I think it is coming to hunt our family and insure bad memories By the way,I am the not the person awake and the person or creature I will not let this happen and I will not back down to this challenge of my life at the dark dark valley something lurking coming to hunt us.

I haven't slept and I am not scared and I am only scared that the family will be in danger and will be really scared they are going to fight hard so we must fight back harder. I will fight for my life and I will not be afraid. I will be a grown brave man who will fulfil my destiny.

I will be a brave young man...

to be continued...
ifeayin city of london acdemy
Comment by Laura Taylor on October 11, 2010 at 9:25
The shadows are lurking about it has horns and a tail it tongue drips with saliva drip…drip I am frightened. The boy is waking up so it the girl the can not see this they’re to young they will be scared oh no… the beast is coming.

I wake up and see a patch on the ceiling as water drips on my face. I now discover where we are, we are trapped in a cellar a dark, damp cellar. The kids are back to sleep the beast is gone so it their parents. It’s coming back to me I remember everything the robots are taking over. I told Fred one they the will take over and all humanity will die.

Now I remember how I came here I was being saved by some family. The put me in here to try and save me now I remember everything oh no I have to save Emily!

Fawaz
City of London academy

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Comment by Laura Taylor on October 11, 2010 at 9:27
Suddenly I hear the crushing of plates and cups,shattering across the marble blue and green floor. Scared but also suspicious I get up to look what's there... “crash, smash, bash” the ceiling collapsed in front of my pale frightened face! Upstairs in the loft it was pitch black, nobody ever went up there, the door would never budge! The house was old and the ceiling wasn't very high so I managed to pull myself up, then out of the darkness crept...

Daniel City of London academy 7h
Comment by Laura Taylor on October 11, 2010 at 9:44
The shadows are creeping around they are so big it’s unreal their feet are enormous every time they step I feel a vibration pounding through the ground, their body is muscle packed, their super fast almost like lightning. I’m literally too scared to move a muscle…. Oh!! It was a dream, but why am I covered in saliva? Let me just look around.

AAAAAHHH……AAAAAHH… Your probably wondering why I stopped screaming after all that but when you have an alien like thing pointing at you what can you do…
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Michael O’Brien
City of London academy
Comment by Laura Taylor on October 11, 2010 at 9:47
The beast attacked, I looked around and there was nothing… Was it my imagination, I must be seeing things. Was it the end of the world? I don’t know. I saw a speck of light so I knew where I was. I wasn’t in my room I was in the basement so I made my way to the stairs and I found a torch, I went up the creaky stairs, out the front door and ALIENS were invading.

Fadel
City of London academy

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