Text by Nadia Azam, Aqsa Bibi and Summan Malik from Laisterdyke B&E College - read by Mr Thompson!

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Comment by Dave Cryer on October 6, 2010 at 11:54
Nice work, Adrian! Loved the delivery from the front man - the writing was excellent, especially the bit about the sister and the way 'it oozed' at the end.
Comment by Tommy Donbavand on October 7, 2010 at 5:51
Great stuff! Can't wait to hear what happens next!

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